Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
-give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
-explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
-describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to apprise you of decision that the local council has taken to shutdown the sports & leisure club stating the reason of cash crunch.
I would like to tell you that me, including my family of four and my friends in my locality use the services of the club extensively. We play several indoor as well as outdoor sports regularly which keeps us health and fit. A bunch of yoga classes that have been recently added to the roster of the club is also a big stress buster for us.
In fact, the entire society is an avid visitor of the club and it acts as a unifying factor for the residents of the community. As stated earlier, the yoga classes are helpful not just for us but for the age groups of 30-65 as well. A lot of young women have joined the self defense classes as well which instills confidence in them so that they can move around in the city confidently and with no worries.
As explained above, if the centre is closed then it will have a huge impact on the lives of all the residents including me and my family. The healthy lifestyle that they enjoying currently will cease to exist which can result in both short and long term health hazards. Moreover, it will take away the togetherness and belongingness they have with each other., It could also result in turning some of them as social outcasts as the club is the only way for them to be socially active.
Therefore, I would strongly urge you to reconsider your decision before closing down our club.
Looking forward for a favourable solution.
Yours Faithfully,
George.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Madam, I would like to apprise you of decision that the local council has take...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: GOT_SHUTDOWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to shut down'?
Suggestion: to shut down
...cision that the local council has taken to shutdown the sports & leisure club stating the r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57342657343 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38511858947 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1553508858 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135030449008 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496136606728 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597625576683 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687526931842 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634833351449 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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