No doubt business is done mainly to earn profits, but some business ethics should also be kept in mind. What do you think, is today's businessman ethical in his practices?
In this modern era, a business or enterprise run their activities for some commercial as well as professional purposes to gain more profit, but it should get some moral values in the mind to run their entrepreneurship. Some people assert that an entrepreneur keeps all business ethics in their work, while others condemn about this statement. I agree with the former statement about which I will discuss in following segments.
There are multifarious reasons as per my opinion. The first and foremost is that they provide good quality products as per the cost. Moreover media plays an immense role if they do any immoral practices and as a result, their good will is affected . In addition to it, they fulfill all the responsibilities for society such as some welfare schemes introduced by the company. As well as, they produce the products as for the requirements of customers. Along with it, they give genuine schemes to provide satisfactory level of customers. Last but not least, they maintain a proper drainage system for their Industrial waste which prevents air pollution, which is beneficial for the health of society.
On another school of thought, some people believe differently due to myraids reasons. First is adulteration in products without taking care of purity and only for their own profit. Moreover, they provide low quality products at a high cost and by doing this give chance to customers for bargaining, which in turn poses negative impact on the customers minds. Along with it, there is no proper system of drainage for their Industrial waste, which causes pollution in the environment. As well as, the they provide immoral practices such as discounts, fake advertisements and so on.
To wrap up the discussion, I think that although, profit plays a major concern in every trade, but ethics should be kept in mind to survive for a long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03536977492 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82484370295 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.721298845 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120896763381 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370832706379 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520198365451 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947839918505 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632542973132 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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