People often believe that great musicians are born and not made. Do you agree that we are born with much of our ability or are there other factors as family, environment that determine success.
The personality of a person is determined by some of his unique potentials which he possesses. Some Masses deem that human beings who are superior period music players are born talented by birth, but others feel that they are famous and well known due to the other reasons that contribute towards their success. l agree completely with the latest statement and will discuss about its measures in the following segments.
As far as my views are concerned, the predominant factor is family support because until and unless a person is not motivated and guided by his parents, he will not be able to achieve his desired goal even he has lots of capabilities in a particular field of his interest.Moreover, environment plays an indespensable role in attaining high peaks of progress for an efficient and talented person, because a positive environment will motivate that person in an effective manner. For instance, whether it is a place where a capable personality is getting training or at home, all members including his master always contribute towards creation of a healthy and meaningful environment.
Moving further, not only family and environment are favouring the great musicians, but another inevitable factor is true dedication towards one's target. They always fulfill their desires if they have a true sense of attaining success in their life. Last but not the least, is the availability of resources required to make them expert in their field of own choice. So, equipments help them a lot in their further progress always.
Incompendium, every person has his own potentials and hidden abilities. These special qualities should not be suppressed at all and the capable personalities should always be encouraged to achieve the desired goals for the betterment of their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21724137931 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93294258378 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.980007134 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086420417207 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317663677878 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369290248219 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052811648727 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483133767922 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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