Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that actions of individuals are wasteful and irrelevant and it is only government and large businesses that can make a difference. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
A fraction of society believes that steps to prevent global climate change should be taken by everyone at a personal level. While others maintain that these actions are of no benefits and authorities with power like government and influential businesses can make a significant change. this essay will discuss both theses views and come to an opinion.
There are many who say that it is of utmost importance that individuals participate fully in improving and saving our environment which has a direct impact on global climate change. If we look at the core of global warming we see that humans are responsible through our actions in bringing about this, so effort to improve this should also begin at grass root level. Firstly, everyone should reduce their carbon foot prints, stop throwing trash openly, reduce our usage of non-degradable materials and actively participate in recycling. Every one should put their maximum effort in reducing the waste products that they generate.
On the other hand, many people are of the opinion that it is of utmost importance that the government and big businesses who have sufficient power and resources take more significant action in curbing climate change. Government has the authority to keep a check on its citizens to ensure that they do not cause excessive pollution. One good way is to spread awareness of consequences of global warming and actions for how to prevent from this. Another way can be to use paper bags for shopping an mandatory recycling. In comparison, large business contribute heftily to pollution and they should make sure that the production of their goods are environmentally friendly with minimal waste production. they should also use renewable source of energy and recycled products as far as possible,
In conclusion, I am of the view that in order to control a huge problem like global climate change, efforts are required from both individual and powerful authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15772870662 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77292269988 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589905362776 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6369252891 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.769230769 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250740404486 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809871340366 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554384334844 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150544877635 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556071357053 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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