United States Vote System
The aim of the essay is to talk about the voting system used in the United States. On one hand critics say that current system does not work.
But on the other hand people say that computers can not reemplace the system.
It seems to me like there are disadventages and adventages.
Firstly, let us give the adventages of using computer vote.
First of all computer's count will not make mistakes as well as humans does.
That is becouse if the program is right, it can not fail.
Futhermore,computer can help people who can not see on the paper clearly and it can have colors as big letter.
Besides can talk to help old people.
Moreover the computers could help the planet becouse people does not have to print millons of papers to vote.
Secondly, i am going to write the disadventages.
The first is that computers could fail if the lights set down by accidentally and it would be a problem.
It could fail accidentally or due to for a person who want to do it.
The second reason is that humans made the computers. Thus if humans make mistakes counting the votes. Also could make mistakes making the computers .
Reason number three it is that old people do not know how computers work, hance they could vote wrong accidentally.
All in all the goverment have to waste to much money.
To sum up, let us conclude that nowdays is not efficient that computer have to be the voting system.
All the disadventages show us that there are a lot of things to do if the United States want to change.
But it is clear that on the future, it will be a perffect system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , computer
...m is right, it can not fail. Futhermore,computer can help people who can not see on the...
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Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore,computer can help people who can not see on the paper clearly and it can have...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
... and it can have colors as big letter. Besides can talk to help old people. Moreover ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... Besides can talk to help old people. Moreover the computers could help the planet bec...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...millons of papers to vote. Secondly, i am going to write the disadventages. T...
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Line 16, column 53, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ason is that humans made the computers. Thus if humans make mistakes counting the vo...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...umans make mistakes counting the votes. Also could make mistakes making the computer...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...could make mistakes making the computers . Reason number three it is that old peo...
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Line 18, column 40, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... All in all the goverment have to waste to much money. To sum up, let us conclu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54895104895 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54716463697 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496503496503 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1923508835 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.9523809524 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.619047619 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.53405017921 397% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218784023843 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602617454491 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882284338202 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631352404458 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875468292456 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 11.7677419355 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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