The environment we live in is in danger. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this?
Nowadays, the environmental problems have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “who is responsible for the environmental dangers, the government or individuals?”. It is a widely held view that preserving the natural ecosystem is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that the causes and solutions of this issue must be taken into account.
To begin with, it is a common belief that finding the causes of the environmental crisis plays a vital role in the fast-changing world. First and foremost is that the emissions of greenhouses leads to the destruction of the ozone layer and subsequently cause to melt the ice poles or acid rain that deteriorate the monuments. Secondly, a wide variety of disease, such as cancer or heart attack rooted in the toxic gases that are emitted from the destructive vehicle. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that deforestation and overfishing is the other prominent reason for the environmental problems.
However, there is no doubt that various efficient solution should be considered to address the environmental problems. One possible approach would be encouraged people to leave their private cars and use the public transport system. The alternative approach would be offering loan to factories to relocate to the less beautiful areas. Lastly, the government should put adequate investment to equip the public transport system and make them convenient for citizens.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that it would be rational to lay a blame the environment problem on both the government and individuals. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... the environmental problems have become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'melting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: melting
... the ozone layer and subsequently cause to melt the ice poles or acid rain that deterio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41197183099 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20960506444 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.782813224 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.083333333 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801744790856 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250326796441 0.0925447433944 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265126404002 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465589666038 0.151781067708 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362028466171 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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