The 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrate to developing countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
During the 18th century a lot of people migrated to developed countries for better job opportunities, comfortable lifestyle and economic stability, which eventually affected the many areas of developed countries. I agree that this change has a significant effect on developed countries and I would like to share my views on the same.
Firstly, earlier those days, the industrialization had just started. Many people started looking for new opportunities outside their native. As the local opportunities were limited, so people easily got their jobs in better places other than their own countries. This led to inflow of immigrants and subsequently, rise in the population started to begin.
Furthermore, when the immigrants took the developed nations lucrative jobs, the locals were deprived from their right to work within their own countries. This badly hampered the situation. People started to rebel, they became involved in social offences and opted for easy money earning. These not only made the situation worst, but also made the narcotic products popular within the new generations.
To conclude, the 18th century boom in industrialization has hampered both lifestyle and led to the instability of social equilibrium.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 189.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53968253968 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08018316739 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2991890537 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1818181818 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269321327029 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853007686838 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894850236402 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160528005119 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104403352643 0.0609392437508 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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