studying abroad
Nowdays it is a well know fact that studying abroad is a wonderful opportunity to grow up in your life in all the aspects you can imagine. But also it has disadventages.
Firstly, it is absolutely right that studying in one of the top 10 best countries in the world it is a perffect opportunity in my life. In the study as well as in basketball.
Unlike as Argentina, the study and the sport are together. I am going to study buisness, thus if I came back to work in Argentina, in my opinion the diploma of canadian university give me a lot of chance to get a job.
In addition to this, I am going to speak a perffect English.
Secondly, there are disadventages. Studying abroad means be away from your home.
My family is very close, so I will miss they a lot as well as my boyfriend.
Moreover, the tickets are expensive. With this in mind it is difficult that they travel to visit me. One thing is certain, I am going to miss they.
In the final analysis, although it will be the best opportunity of my life and I became not only a best student but also person and basketball player, it will be hard.
However, I am going to want a job to rich money to pay tickets for my family to visit me. It seems to me like I am a blessed person. Becouse not much people can get this opportunity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 98, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...tunity of my life and I became not only a best student but also person and basket...
^
Line 12, column 145, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...like I am a blessed person. Becouse not much people can get this opportunity.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 248.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66060597262 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512096774194 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.635470867 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5882352941 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2252628798 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075996533871 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117923038466 0.0737576698707 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103432914713 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123570646272 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 11.7677419355 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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