Every country has their own set of laws, rules and regulations. Some people decides to follow these laws, while others just ignore those. There is an ongoing debate between different categories of people, where one group believes that law can have huge impact on the human behavior, while the other the group does not agree with that statement. This essay will discuss at both the sides in greater details.
Law can change human behavior as it instills fear among the citizens by way of fines and penalties. For instance, issuing speeding and red-light fines help maintain decorum on the streets. This fear of fine helps keeps the human desire under check which, in turn, improves the safety of others on the street. As the time progressed, people got comfortable with this and they changed their behavior accordingly to adjust to this law. Hence, law can indeed change human behavior.
On the other side, law cannot change human behavior as certain characteristic in human nature are unchangeable and they create hinderance towards obeying some rigorous rules. Some people will just keep on repeating the same thing or behave violently no matter what the law suggests. Even issuing penalties against those individuals will have no effect on their behavior. As a result, there are some instances, even when a law cannot any effect on human behavior.
Law helps to keep the violent nature of human beings under control, which, in turn, makes the society peaceful and livable. Everyone should try their best to follow the laws, for their own safety and for the others.
- Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds All levels of education from primary school to tertiary education should be free To what extent do you agree with this opinion 75
- Is that law can change the human behaviour? 72
- Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree? 77
- Medical technology is responsible for the human’s life expectancy. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 80
- The importance of travel seems to be over rated. Brilliant scholars locked themselves at home. Travel is important for education. To what extent to you agree or disagree. 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, if, so, still, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02290076336 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35556489488 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0292036915 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7333333333 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32008099348 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122740306802 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149097360132 0.071462118173 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186855140374 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101288801483 0.0609392437508 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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