The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.
The line graph depicts, the various type of museums (British museum, Science museum and natural history museum) watched to visitors in London between September and June in 2013.
According to the graph, lots of people to visited British museum and the lowest people visited Science museum. On the other hand most of visitors were started to see British museum in June. Between June and July months were rapidly increased and August sharply decreased. And Science museum and natural history museums were started in the same month . And both lines were shown approximately same visitors to watched the museum . Natural history museum was gradually gone down and from July and August months were represented remained stable. And August month was dramatically rised. Science museum was shown between June and August minths were remained unchanged. On the one hand August gradually increased. Overall, all museums were started in june and lots of people liked to see British museum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the visitors') or simply say ''most visitors''.
Suggestion: most of the visitors; most visitors
...sited Science museum. On the other hand most of visitors were started to see British museum in J...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y museums were started in the same month . And both lines were shown approximately...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tely same visitors to watched the museum . Natural history museum was gradually go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26282051282 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31175597124 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448717948718 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8666882628 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6363636364 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262583089752 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116226405711 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107699724531 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297433166705 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119101763326 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.