homeschooling
In the present age, homeschooling is paid more attention by society and parents, more parents do not send their children to traditional public schools to study, so homeschooling is getting more pubulare in our lives. Homeschooling is a method of education that children can study knowledge or course at home from parents but sometimes by tutors. However, whether parents should send children to traditional school to study has become a highly debatable issue. Some people think that the children should go to traditional school to study while many others disagree. Personally, I think homeschooling has more benefits for students for two main reasons. The first reason is that parents can design the curriculum. The second reason is controlling the time.
One of the most basic advantages of homeschooling is students or parents can custom-designed curriculum by themselves. To start with, homeschooling students can mastery over work at their own level. Specifically, sometimes most students are not at the same level for each course, they may be reading at a higher level than writing, they may be not good at math but very interested in chemistry. In the traditional public schooling, the best teacher also cannot care about every student's level. But homeschooling provides students the real progress and set up the students' real level in each course to make sure that they understand what they studied. In addition, each student has their own learning style to get knowledge. In fact, the parents of homeschooling students are more understanding for their children than the public school teachers. The students of homeschooling can use their own learning style to study depends on their own ability, but public school students must follow teacher's teaching style.The learning ability of students is according to their natural learning style not only following the teacher. Obviously, custom-designed curriculum by the family is better than by traditional school.
Another reason is that students can control their time. For example, when they get some illness or vacations they can stop studying untill they get better or finish thir study. Moreever, they will not lose some lessons cause they are absent because of illness and they can strat from the same time lesson they stoppe. In addition, homeschooling students can move on from page to another and from lesson to lesson depends on their ability and pace of understanding.
To conclude, it is known that homeschooling is more popular in the world than before, parents thinks that homeschooling is better for the development of their children's ability in the future. Homeschooling is having many benefits. Students and parents can design their own curriculum; it is good for students' interest.. They can master and distribute their own time to study; homeschooling students are more free and flexible than traditional school students. The benefits of homeschooling are clear. In my opinion, the students of homeschooling can have higher ability in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2550.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3125 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95432827485 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429166666667 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 766.8 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2234552752 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0769230769 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88461538462 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273338266953 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124979932845 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134335765402 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214113375979 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123098040803 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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