You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and was not able to play with you at the weekend. You decide write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
-tell him which team won
-describe the conditions of the day
-see how if you felt about the match
Hello! How are you? I am fine. I am Player of India team. The purpose of mind to penning down this epistle is to inform you to be play the match without you, because, you had an accident, last Tuesday 22nd of February 2018.
This match was heading on last Sunday, 25 February 2018 and competition between India and Sri Lanka team. But, one day of matches left and I hear, you had an accident with the car, in Delhi Ambala road. You had a small injury in left arm and you do not participate in this match. But fine, every team member was come in match without you,and this match is won by Sri Lanka team.
That day, the climate is not good, the weather was cold on that day. If you come on this match, that maybe we won't this match and every member of team are missing you. Because you are a good member of this team.all the team members and regards for you.
Yours truly
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...eam member was come in match without you,and this match is won by Sri Lanka team. ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bers and regards for you. Yours truly Aman
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22941176471 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.90647231247 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.078449635 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9166666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356541912986 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138957304758 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790734774545 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258044569215 0.12726935374 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143289485846 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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