The map demonstrates the area of Garlsdon, which has a total population of 65,000 people. There are two possible locations shown for building a supermarket.
As stated by the map, the S1 is situated at the north-west of the countryside. The industrial area is 12 km to Hindon, which has a total of 10,000 inhabitants. The main road is passing over the countryside to Hindon. It can easily be accessible for the people of Hindon. There is a railway track from Hindon to Cransdon, which passed over the north-west of countryside. It crosses over the industrial area, passing through the center of the town and then straight to Cransdon. There is a main raod which is 25 km to Cransdon from the industrial zone. It is situated in south-east with 29,000 residents.
The second supermarket is at the center of the town. It is near the northern and southern housing society, and reachable for the people of Bransdon and Cransdon. Bransdon is 16km distant from the factory beltstar, easily attainable by road. It has the total population of 15,000 people.
The population of Hindon is lesser than the population of Bransdon and Cransdon. So, the S1 might not be the perfect situation for the supermarket. The S2 placement is convenient for the most residents, hence, it is the best location for the supermarket.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89237668161 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91754268862 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479820627803 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0207504811 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.1764705882 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1176470588 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.35294117647 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233164268291 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077929833027 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943936437987 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175292195777 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876298740695 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.19 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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