News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures.
Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this?
Part of journalism is learning photography to support written news on newspapers and news packages on TV with visuals. As many people think that it is the method to deliver messages more than words. I believe that a picture is essential element in telling a story with the support of written materials for several reasons.
To begin with, a picture can be judged wrongly by individuals. They can judge on the situation by looking at the photo only and analyze the situation different than reality. Because of this misconception, an outrage may rise against the governments, the world power, and etc. A Syrian boy found dead on the shore of Turkey. Many people thought at first that Syrian Regime shoots him, but he died drowning in the sea because he flees the war in Syria. This story tells that a picture is an important part of news, but in the same time accompanied by a text adds more explanation to the situation.
A visual could mislead the justice in cases of asylum seekers. Many countries, among them Canada and Germany, have opened their doors for refugees. Most of them are seeking permit residences. To make that happen, they provide pictures to support their situations in court. However, many pictures are downloaded from the internet which helps fraud to stay in the country as new citizens.
In conclusion, there are two reasons I think that pictures are not so effective without the support of words. It misleads the justice to give sponsorship to asylum seekers. An image could be also justified differently by many people in wrong way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s and news packages on TV with visuals. As many people think that it is the method...
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Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...nly and analyze the situation different than reality. Because of this misconception,...
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Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ainst the governments, the world power, and etc. A Syrian boy found dead on the shore of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84644194757 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62657656643 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1546407898 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1176470588 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193283842969 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528448223935 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595325568695 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111895420226 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609992929442 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.