In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, number of groups ideologies has been created and they affect significantly on people thinking. Some people believe that a group's ideology causes negative impact on a common man, while others argue that a common man gains a benefit from formation of different ideologies. This essay will discuss how the groups ideologies formation affect negatively on a common man and it leads to the death of people in some part of the world.
Formation of a group ideology affects on people performance. People behave more violence and they do not have the conscious to understand the others. Recent research, which was conducted in Cambridge university, has shown that people who follow a specific ideology behave more violence that others, and this has led to the increasing number of wars throughout the world. Therefore, it seems clear that a common man is affected negatively from the formation of the groups ideologies and consequently people behave more violence.
On the other hand, some people think that spread of groups ideologies enables people to communicate easier. Group ideology helps people to accept the behaviors of other people. But these people are unaware of the fact that the number of groups ideologies which established on the acceptance of others are very low, and most of these groups push people to behave violence. Thus, group ideology affect negatively on people performance and and the violence cases have increased because of this phenomenon.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how a common man is affected by the formation the groups ideologies which affect on people behaviors. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that people should not adopt any ideology because it leads to spread of violence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...le thinking. Some people believe that a groups ideology causes negative impact on a co...
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Line 6, column 434, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...affect negatively on people performance and and the violence cases have increased becau...
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Line 8, column 111, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...e formation the groups ideologies which affect on people behaviors. In my opinion, I am i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18118466899 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70692018131 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442508710801 0.580463131201 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1621667082 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243651716284 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119125548398 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415084977032 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177324576629 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018794824809 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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