Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss the positive and negative impacts of this.
The revolution in communication has a substantial impact in the modern world. Some people argue that the innovation in the communication has made people’s lives better, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that the ways people interact now have brought some serious concerns. This essay will further discuss on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are various ways how communication has turnaround the lives of people in a positive way and the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that the advancements in technology have offered a medium of instant, effective and easier way to talk. For instance, we now live in a world of video and audio calls, Whatsapp, Skype, roaming where we can contact our long-lost friends thus, replacing the conventional forms of telephones and telegrams. This means that distance is no longer a barrier for people and the world has shrunk into a small village. Thus, we can interact with our family and relatives quickly and conveniently even if they are far away.
In contrast, there are some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential benefits of means of communication. The most alarming one is that people no longer talk to each other face to face and are mostly glued to the screens of their smartphones and tablets. This has hampered the real interaction among people due to which they feel isolated and lonely. Hence, it is apparent why the revolutionary means of communication has made people recluse, dull and unsocial.
In views of the arguments outlined above, the impact of communication is prominent although there are minor downsides which can be well-handled if people maintain the social interaction between them.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-03-07 | meenutalwar | 85 | view |
| 2018-03-07 | meenutalwar | 77 | view |
| 2018-03-07 | meenutalwar | 80 | view |
- What are the reasons for Climate change and what roles government, individuals and Corporates can play to improve it? 85
- Nowadays TV has become an essential part of our life Medium to spread news and awareness and for some it acts like a companion What is your opinion about this 75
- Government should reduce their investments in arts, music and painting. Do you agree or disagree? 77
- Most artists earn low salaries and should, therefore, receive social welfare from governments in order for them to continue their work. Discuss the extent to which you would agree/disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/o 77
- Poverty is a major issue worldwide. Many charities exist to help collect monetary donations. Who should decide what the donations are spent on? The people in need or the charitable organisations? Support your point of view from your own experience, observ 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...tion has turnaround the lives of people in a positive way and the most conspicuous one stems from...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11267605634 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89748298653 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0172975703 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105828205456 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438267708028 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415589648563 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694326434745 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306293932465 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.