What is the cost and benefits of unsuitable advertising.

Essay topics:

What is the cost and benefits of unsuitable advertising.

The advertisement is a billion dollar business, and most investors are cynicism which motivates AD business-persons to use unethical and unacceptable methods to make more money to remain in business. In this essay, the idea of advertisement and three inappropriate methods are discussed.
The idea of advertisement is about introducing products, either is ignored or just launched, however hunger to own more money has generated the methods in which lying, misleading, abusing lack of information, lust, exaggerating in praise, and some other similar manners are included.
To sell a product which is completely useless a sociologist is highly recommended. by knowledge of how communities would respond to an ad, the ad business-persons can make a need in their target. For example, we have never thought about using a sticky plastic to keep our shirt collar in form. Dose formed collar definitely matter? the ad persons ingrain this need in the ad victim. Another example of how important a sociologist is, when the targets necessities are visible, they can abuse it. For example, the ad persons know that most of us want to be in shape so a useless pill would be announced accompanied by hoping for no side effects.
In this part a short bypass is needed, Did Robin Hood do right? “stealing to feed poor peasants”, his objective looks appreciable, however, the chosen way is not acceptable, nevertheless, lying to people is not ethically right. For example, male medications like pills for better genitals is all-over the media. They use three methods, first, sexy model teases the target to induce a demand for change while they are lying about how this medicine would do scientific magic. A similar unethical method which is literally lying is exaggerating in praise to catch the eyes of the targets. For example, meals you buy is not comparable with mouthwatering foods you see in an AD.
Misleading is a very common method ever. Two examples are written. First, a commercial advertisement about socks, a sexy lady in bikinis leans on a six-packed guy who wears that socks. Second, a nude girl covered in a bed sheet while her cleavage is shown then a guy in underpants come and give her a diet cock. In this ADs, The victims are distracted by their lust to buy junks.
In the end, I am convinced, finding the best life goods is my mind job not my eyes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, then, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.935 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01195949508 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1844459634 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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