Sime people say that leisure time is important for having a good life , while other belive that money is important . Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that all people prefer to live happy camper life, therefore human wants to take a rest for their brain. In my opinion, spend time ti do more activities in leisure time is the the best while i strongly agragree that situation.
Initially, today all people as busy as a bee. On the other hand men and women both categories are today so busy to work. and not their body , all people brain want to take a chill out. Furthermore , leisure time is obviously most important all people and want to reduce their brain struggles. Moreover , but some people wants to money and deprive their best time. However , its not perfect because one day you'll be a perfect ten but didnt rest , you'll face various type of diseases. For instance cholestarol, sugar , peasure etc..
In addition , a large proportion cant go back their adolescents age. At the present most of people addicted to save money and dont spend leisure time on the other hand these type of people day by day grow up. As a reault , conversely , one day they think back and worry why we didint spend leisure time.
In conclusion , humans brain want to take a rest mentally and delicious life. The cleverest people kill two birds with one stone , live life happily and save currency. On the one side young generations can get the sublime idea for these type of peoples.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63559322034 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35874350742 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1191609179 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.9333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224719887112 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721374474629 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557979412344 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135538790523 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383297274362 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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