In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. Some of the greatest inventions are due to advancements in medicine, science and technology. What do you think is the most important of the advancements?
In the past century, there have been great inventions because of advancements in science, technology, and medicine. The most important is the advancements of the computer. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why the computer is the most important invention.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support the computer as the greatest invention. At first, although the advancements in medicine increased the level of life expectancy, the computer has been very effective in human's life. Many types of equipment in medicine powered by computer systems. For example, today, the surgeons use computer systems in their operations in the surgery room.
In addition, while the inventions in transportation have highly influenced on people's life, the computer has become a part of living. The computer affected on most of the inventions and instruments that we are using every day. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MTN University researchers in 2015 shows that a significant number of transportation systems such as vehicles, airplanes, and trains powered by the computer.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments about the most important invention in the past 100 years, my personal sentiment is that the computer is the biggest invention that affected nearly on all recent inventions.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42105263158 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02448362566 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55980861244 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9551390026 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.110354655366 0.0925447433944 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101243808348 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178250749973 0.151781067708 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100768267966 0.0609392437508 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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