While some people tend to spend their holidays in a place that everything organized and prepared for them, others interested in traveling around the country to know about people live and their traditions. For the foreign travel, it is good to go to countries that have historic buildings or old traditions.
To begin with, there are various to go to countries with a historic past different customs. Firstly, although many people prefer to travel to countries with advanced facilities and modern entertainments, traveling to countries with various cultures is also good. We could learn about their style of life. For example, Turkey is a country with diverse nations with delicious food and different customs.
In addition, there are many ancient countries in the world. In these countries, you can see historic buildings and museum with ancient objects. the historic places can be attractive for many people. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by VBG University researchers shows that a significant number of archaeologists and people who interested in ancient places go to countries like Italy to know about their history.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on the type of foreign traveling, my personal sentiment is that trip in countries with long past, ancient places and traditional nations can make a great memory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33796296296 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84980310609 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560185185185 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1990997578 50.4703680194 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.818181818 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309943358072 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118548466191 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135479293516 0.071462118173 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195330973781 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152634219436 0.0609392437508 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.