People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? what should be done to encourage people to protect the environment.
Give reasons for your answer or include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Nature is a gift by god to mankind and it is the responsibility of every human being to take care of it.An environment plays a significant role in survival of human beings as well as a home for various birds, animals, insects etcetera. But due to interference of human activities, ecological balance of atmosphere get disturbed. Even public is aware of significance of atmosphere still they are doing nothing. In following paragraphs, I am going to explain the reasons why human beings
are not paying attention towards nature and the steps that government should take to preserve an environment.
There are plethora of factors that people are not taking responsibility to safeguard the nature. Predominant of them is increasing population. Individuals are cutting down the trees and forests in order to utilize that land to construct houses. Due to decrease in number of trees, earth's temperature is increasing causing global warming. Beside that, people are setting up more industries in order to meet the demands of extending population. Emerging Smoke from such factories pollutes air and waste materials from industries are dumped into water resources causing water pollution and kill various marine bodies. Moreover, to improve the quantity of vegetables, fruits, commercial crops etcetera, individuals use fertilizers and other chemicals which causes soil and water pollution.
Leeping further, Human beings have become materialistic. They do not consider about environment but they are worried about their status in society. They spend money on buying luxurious cars. They do not use public transports but private means of transports. More use of private means cause air as well as noise pollution. Government has to take serious steps to protect an environment. Authorities should arrange seminars to create awareness among general public and tell them about the importance of atmosphere. Legal bodies should make arrangements to celebrate Environment day every year and made it compulsory for every person to plant one tree on an eve of 'Environment Day'. They should encourage people to use public transports rather than private.
To gist, I would like to say that it is not only a prime responsibility of government to preserve nature but citizens should also come forward. It is a right time that people should come forward to protect an atmosphere otherwise it will be too late and they will suffer from great lost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: An
...of every human being to take care of it.An environment plays a significant role in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'crops'' or 'crop's'?
Suggestion: crops'; crop's
...ntity of vegetables, fruits, commercial crops etcetera, individuals use fertilizers a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y spend money on buying luxurious cars. They do not use public transports but privat...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ange seminars to create awareness among general public and tell them about the importance of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28350515464 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92088437333 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4517607749 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1818181818 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215545459078 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546431822107 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588673039082 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111083392681 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022901195389 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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