The pie charts demonstrate the percentage of water utilizing for in widely different six fields of the globe with 3 comparison.
To begin with, the general overview of the highest water consumed possesed by agricultural use in 4 by 6 different areas. Central Asia in the first positon with 88%, , followed by Africa, South East Asia, and South America with percentage 84 %, 81% and 71 %. In contrast to, the portion of water consumption in North America and Europe are in the second position in agriculture below the industrial purposes.
However, the most water usage in industrial field is North America and Europe to take a places around 48 % and 53 % while in 4 areas left range 5% to 10% . Therefore, the percentage of domestic use as slightly common scarcely with range 7 % and the high 19%.
- The planet s population is reaching unsustainable levels and people are facing shortage of resources like water food and fuel To what consequences may overpopulation lead In your opinion what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation 82
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both these views and give yo 56
- Some modern artist receive huge sums of money for the things they create while others struggle to survive Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
- The population in most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities What problem does overpopulation in the cities cause How can these problems be solved 25
- Nowadays the use of social media such as facebook, twitter and so on is becoming more popular than one on one conversation. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages. 96
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86029411765 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73940282543 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669117647059 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.6980852699 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.166666667 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 5.23603664747 293% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255279171839 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122030354622 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088088134555 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184086593752 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850923411767 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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