Many people engage in dangerous activities such as diving, bungee jumping, etc. What do you think of these activities?
In 20th Century most of young people are engaging a hazardous sports. This activities has a positive and negative outcome .
Many teenager or adulthood like so much fun that it might be risky for them.
All around the world it is a life threatening sports to make a competition. Like for example jumping in a mountain that 250 feet long it might be scary for other people, or others they enjoy about it.
I believe that you should have a strong mind and determination when doing it because it might be unsafe, especially if you do it for the first time in your whole life.
Second, When planning to join a dangerous event you should not be frightened. In this day a lot of both gender are wanting to experience because it's a trilling that they are exposed such activities. One of the most common is jumping in the airplane that you had a parachute in your back. If you choose this you should not be afraid of height because no one will help you if you jump in the air. Before doing this somebody will teach you how to inflate or deflate a parachute so if their something wrong happen you know what you will do in case of emergency landing.
Therefore, I conclude that its beneficial to us,as well as it might harm our self but one that we may consider as a pleasure , and it is like once in a life time wonderful experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sport'?
Suggestion: sport
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Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...people are engaging a hazardous sports. This activities has a positive and negative ...
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...ing a hazardous sports. This activities has a positive and negative outcome . Man...
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Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ties has a positive and negative outcome . Many teenager or adulthood like so mu...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun teenager seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many teenagers'.
Suggestion: Many teenagers
...has a positive and negative outcome . Many teenager or adulthood like so much fun that it m...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...world it is a life threatening sports to make a competition. Like for example jum...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ong mind and determination when doing it because it might be unsafe, especially i...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ender are wanting to experience because its a trilling that they are exposed such a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t one that we may consider as a pleasure , and it is like once in a life time wond...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...s a pleasure , and it is like once in a life time wonderful experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 20.9802955665 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38461538462 5.00649968141 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48724427642 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587044534413 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2410411277 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181215954942 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062698107071 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484046580475 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075246733924 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666812390001 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 11.5310837438 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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