You paid for a holiday overseas, but the holiday was very disappointing. Write a letter to the travel company. In your letter explain which holiday you went on. describe why the holiday was disappointing. tell the company what you want them to do
Dear Madam/Sir,
I am writing to express my disappointment in the services provided by your company in my recent trip to Thailand. Last month, on July the 3rd, I purchased the holiday plan number 3 to Bangkok for my honeymoon with my wife. The package included two flight tickets, 10 nights at a 5-star hotel with breakfast and dinner.
Respectfully, let me explain the reason of my complain. First and foremost, the hotel's condition was not suitable. It was far away from the city's sightseeing, the staff were extensively rude and uncooperative, and the meals were not self-service which is the basic requirement of a 5-star hotel. Another problem was with the airport shuttle to the hotel which was 2 hours late without any appropriate explanation.
I believe that your company is a prestigious one which absolutely cares about customer satisfaction. Thus, I wanted to kindly advise on the situation and request compensation, considering the fact that it was my honeymoon, the one special travel of everybody's life. It would be also very thoughtful of you if you could provide alternative options for the choice of hotel.
Yours Sincerely,
Alexander Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Madam/Sir, I am writing to express my disappointmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14659685864 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04388918473 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680628272251 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.700378383 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195928891126 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625807256682 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390692742908 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11807907788 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406405981193 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.