The two maps given show information about the center of the town named Islip currently and the advancements in the future.
Overall, there are many significant notifications in the planning map.
As can be seen from the first map as the present map, the Islip town is simply divided into separate parts
the countryside as the majority area, the shop and the resident estate by the Main road.
The road is created for the purpose of transportation and the park is for entertainment purpose which is located in the east of the town center.
In the second map, the most noticeable point in the future will be the widening of road from deforesting the countryside as can be seen as a laying ring road that will occupy the whole town. Similarly, the main road will be developed for walking purpose only.
Also, the park area will be narrowed for the construction of the new housing area that makes the number of housing area to be three in total at the south and east of the town. Likewise, the huge area of countryside would be narrowed for the increase in area of more complex area compounding the bus station, the shopping center and the car park. It is worth to note that at the West-South, will be reconstructed new Dual carriageway.
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- The line graph below shows the population size birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, second, similarly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59016393443 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31920866598 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463114754098 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.33902439024 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.176810785 43.030603864 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.444444444 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 3.83414634146 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171397272724 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868602416156 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441421021598 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067230863344 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449284463495 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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