What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.
The effect of social media on our daily life, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of stay connected to it 24 hours a day as sparked the controversy over potential impact of this trend on idea that will stay connected to the world in recent years. It can be agreed that there are lots of perks of social media. This essay will elaborate both advantages and disadvantages of social media and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset there are deluges of arguments in favor of my stance how it is important to stay online all the time but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that every second something is going on in the world. For instance staying connected with your favourite person or brand online will help you to know about them.
Nevertheless some people adopt the opposing view and tend to believe that it has to many side effects. A startling new research, in this area invariably reveals that most of the time staying online, people forget the person sitting next to them.
In the light of above discussion, it can be concluded that the impact of social media is prominent, although it has numbers of drawbacks that should be well handled. The advantage of staying connected on social media outweigh its disadvantages.
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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...as to many side effects. A startling new research, in this area invariably reveal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76548672566 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65209663689 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.131984566 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.7 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30734952409 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112660538463 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896449163699 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156548070114 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100244669233 0.0609392437508 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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