The graph below shows Long-Term International Migration in UK, 1999-2008.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a chart illustrating the amount of two types of migration in UK as well as the net of immigrants for a period of ten years from 1999 to 2008.
Overall, more and more people chose to move to Great Britain for a new life in the period given while the figure of emigration slightly climbed as well, despite the number of former was always considerably higher than the latter. Meanwhile, the total of net immigration ranged from 100,000 to 200,000 over ten years.
With respects to the immigrants, the number of that reached a peak in 2006, which accounted for precisely 600,000 people a year. In comparison, the figure of the emigrants peaked a high point in 2008 (slightly over 400,000 people a year). Something interesting was that the number of both two types of migrants was the lowest in 1999, exactly the beginning of the period (around 300,000 people and just over 450,000 people respectively).
It could also been seen from the graph that the net amount of immigrants in 2004 was the highest, compared to that in 2003, which was the lowest (about 250,000 and slightly under 150,000 respectively).
- The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. 73
- Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? 84
- The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. 89
- The graph below shows Long-Term International Migration in UK, 1999-2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- the number of marriages and divorces 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77202072539 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58508204872 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538860103627 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1320586142 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.571428571 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.055720377684 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326734526044 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416068646783 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447510177068 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450555243854 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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