Nowadays Television has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts like a companion. What is your opinion
The importance of television has become an essential part of life was always a debatable topic. Even though, many people claim that television acts as medium to spread world news and to create awareness to the society. Others reject this notion and argue that it is big time waster and impacts human relationships. The substantial influence of television has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would further elaborate both sides and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, television provides a wide range to channels to choose from on tourism, foods, lifestyles, knowledge, movies, music, political news and many more. In fact, the information provided is so useful that many people plan their holiday based on a show on tourism, they try to cook new items by following the recipe shown in cooking shows, become aware of all sorts of happenings in the world. From the above example, clearly explains that correlation between TV and human activities.
On the other hand, TV is a great time waster. We no longer have enough time to spend with our families and friends, no time for hobbies, other amusements like theaters, movies and physical activities ignored. People have grown addicted to television, often neglecting the necessary and important things like meals, sleep and most important work. The more the viewer watch the television, the lazier they become. Television prevents people from communicating with each other which had caused the harm to relationship. For example, families sit and watch TV at dinner instead of talking to each other.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that benefits of TV overweighs disadvantages of tv. In a nutshell, television has become an important item for everyone in today's life and there is no domestic family with out any TV in home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...ys life and there is no domestic family with out any TV in home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, for example, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 31.9359605911 163% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 321.0 242.827586207 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14641744548 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80942310496 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619937694704 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8547058476 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1764705882 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194100832695 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556658137683 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766921277031 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111064134892 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712327797092 0.0609392437508 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.