Nowadays Television has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts like a companion. What is your opinion
In the modern world, Television has taken an eminent role in society. There are several advantages and disadvantageous for this medium as it can provide a plethora of information and knowledge about society, as well as it can behave as a companion for some. This essay will discuss the pivotal role of television in society and in the family, and how it can affect people positively and negatively.
At the outset, TV has taken a major role among the people in the information era, because it helps the people to get a link with society. For instance, Television brings a lot of benefits for the people including homemakers and retired or elderly people. These can help those people to get information about the public and the political issues around them. Moreover, they can get updated with the society and forecasting of weather help them to stay away from the difficulties.
On the other hand, there is some downside for the television as it leads to addiction among the children, For instance, parents who are busy with their work, probably switch on the TV and insists the children watch some cartoons or some other programs, which may gradually cause addiction to them. Moreover, the elderly people who do not work at home may do the things in a similar way.
Thus, to conclude, there are many advantages and disadvantages for the television. It can give lots of information and knowledge to us, but, in the same way, which can mislead the people. In my opinion, every invention has its own merits and demerits, so, use all the facilities in an appropriate way which can flourish life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o do not work at home may do the things in a similar way. Thus, to conclude, there are many ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd demerits, so, use all the facilities in an appropriate way which can flourish life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82545454545 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72023333953 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3887831694 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.583333333 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132507340815 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490910969806 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487432715596 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827991613513 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358956576241 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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