Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers are one the crucial facets which can gurantee the progress of a society, so as far as developing of a country is concerned, teachers should enjoy a good salary, and also a decent respec in the society. Some are of the opinion that teachers' social position has been undermined in recent years, while others believe otherwise. I--for one-- subscribe to the first idea. The reasons why I believe so will be elaborate upon hereunder.
First and foremost, the population of the teachers community has been increased dramatically. In the past years, the rate of illiteracy was quite high among people, since they did not attend school; this was in result of lacking enough schools and teachers. With this im mind, in that time, a teacher was a educated person that people respect he or she.
Second, in past years there was no as sophisticated jobs as there is todays. To be more specific, teaching was a demanding occupation which cannot be reached by anyone who wanted it. For example, in my country there was not any stock traders or other high-position jobs like this, therefore being a teacher was more valued in the past than it does todays.
The last but not the least reason which reinforces preceding assertion that teachers seems to be more appreciated in retrospect than they are now, is their salary. Teachers' income was higher in comparison with the other jobs, while today with emerging new occupations with considerable high salary, teachers and professors have an average revenue among the people. Consequently, it has resulted in less respect for the teachers, since the richer a person is, the higher social position he or she has.
All in all, to make the conclusion grounded on the above statements, I do believe that teachers have not the respect they had once a day, since today there are more teachers than the past, many demanding jobs have come into existance, and teachers income has dropped sharply in comparison with other jobs. I hope, one day our athouties come to their senses and take proper measures to give teachers what they deserve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is im mind, in that time, a teacher was a educated person that people respect he ...
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Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...r she. Second, in past years there was no as sophisticated jobs as there is today...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are todays'?
Suggestion: there are todays
...s there was no as sophisticated jobs as there is todays. To be more specific, teaching was a de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88668555241 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59816771732 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558073654391 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4674134377 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172976022361 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569790329139 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471086765275 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995212549037 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379083786441 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.