Some people say material possessions are very useful in bringing us happiness but other argue that they are useless in terms of providing happiness.
Discuss both the views and your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Life is full of joy and sorrow. Happiness is a state of mind when a person feels amused, enjoys the situation and wants to be in that state forever. As Joy is temporary so people try to find it through different means. Some of the individuals feel happy by buying materialistic things like luxurious cars, big flat, huge property, gold and list goes on while others feel happy by enjoying with their family members and friends. In my opinion, I believe that acquiring materialistic things give pleasure for sometime but such kind of happiness is useless.
In today's era of modernisation, people prefer to live in nuclear families and are not having good relations with their siblings because everyone is running after money, status, name and fame. That is why, individuals are attracted towards property and feel happy by buying big car, huge house with a garden etcetera. People think that they are having lots of money so they do not need anyone in their life as they can buy anything, whatever they want. In present time, Individuals indulge into fights and crimes because of property. On the demise of the head of the family, they try to take more property than their sibling and sometimes such cases are settled by the law.
On the other side, Some people think that property does not buy happiness and they thank to God because they are having something to eat and wear. Their real joy lies in the beautiful bond that they share with their blood relatives and friends and they believe that when they will be in bad situation, at that time their close relations will be there to help them but not the tangible resources.
In conclusion, I would like to say that although materialistic things can provide happiness to people for sometime but they do not run after them and destroy their relation with the family because of fame. In emergency situations, family members will be with you but gold and property will not be going to help you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...try to find it through different means. Some of the individuals feel happy by buying materi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74117647059 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43176783631 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508823529412 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0810379895 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138830230936 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513754303969 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431175121993 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095294580041 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160665087011 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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