You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:Give details of your visit to the restaurantExplain the reason f

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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.

Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:

Give details of your visit to the restaurant
Explain the reason for the celebration
Say what was good about the food and the service.
Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir/Madam

I am inscribing this missive to express my delight to the service provided by your restaurant last Saturday, on my birthday celebration party.

We were total fifteen in number, including my family, friends and colleagues. Your waiters were quite polite and helpful and they go out of their way to give us the full support. The food was served totally on a professional way, as we saw in 'Master chef' programme on television.

The food was hot when it got served and your menu list includes all the cusiens and different varieties of food. My friends got very pleased and family members were praising about the ambience of the hotel.

The wine ordered was at correct temperature and the staff served it so well that we totally got impressed. Whenever we need something, tgey were their to guide us. The efforts were well appreciated by all the guests.

I hope to enjoy this kind of service again in the coming future.

Yours sincerely

Radhika

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: fifteen
...day celebration party. We were total fifteen in number, including my family, friends and colle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89759036145 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5704544683 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656626506024 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6593815189 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9090909091 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161121445884 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591871157382 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372930773277 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750333959423 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487063047737 0.0580467560999 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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