Nowadays there is an ongoing debate between people about schools that
they should prepare students for university, rather than for work.
While it is possible to claim that students should go for their
further studies in university after graduating from schools. In this
essay, I shall explain my point of view by supporting those adherents
who claim that schools should prepare their students for university.
There are several solid reasons why the schools should take responsibility
of students to get admission in better university. Because school is
that place where a student learn new thing and enhance his ability in
section of knowledge to get admission in university in easier way
.First and foremost is that students firstly get primary education and
knowledge from schools for enhancing their skills in education field.
After completing these school days students follow their desire dreams
to get admission in highly reputed university and in this situation,
schools play vital role in student’s life. It can also be argued that
students who drop out from schools or who do not complete their higher
education in university may face many problems in their career. For
instance, in a recent survey conducted by PWD researchers in
education field it has been found that approximately seventy five
percent of university drop out students have faced many problems in
their career and many were not got jobs yet.
To recapitulate, I profoundly inclined to believe that schools should
prepare their students for higher education in university. And also
suggests government that they should implement some strict laws for
reducing the ratio of college dropout students for their better
future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47970479705 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67052128559 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560885608856 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3068711825 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.5 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.12807881773 606% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280811064949 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144638289513 0.0925447433944 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774413431589 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863745292332 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847637648803 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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