Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
In recent years, many people with different cultures have immigrated around the world. Then many problems come up with life in those cities, and the authority needs to take many actions to make citizens settle in a harmonious city.
Firstly, the government should impose law and order. If we do not have the lawful society, social evils will harm its citizens, and some suffer from insecurity. It is not a perfect right and a livable environment. Will you park your car in the place where the thief can steal it during the night? One more example is that children face the threat of being kidnapped on the way to school.
Secondly, to live better in the crowded and varied cities, community spirit is needed. People help each other when their neighbours have troubles. They call the police right away when they detect wrongdoers in the neighbourhood. A specific action is to keep the city clean. As a result, this helps them have a decent living space.
Finally, people join hands with universe justice, and I would like to say about equality of payment. Men and women are treated somewhat on the same basis. They get paid according to their talent and ability. No racism is allowed in the multicultural society. Then everyone will be ready to participate in the social activities such as sports events, musical shows, community work.
In conclusion, I argue that it is not easy to have a peaceful living in the cities which have the variety of culture and people. All governments need more efforts for the citizens. It is a tendency to live a better life everywhere for the entire world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80797101449 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50848957618 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7591289854 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.35 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240880544535 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537561461766 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530978252319 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114381675457 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055701521025 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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