Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
No one can deny the relation between parents and their offspring. Therefore, it is believed that, including me, parents should have legal responsibilities for their children's activities. This essay will explain the parent's first priority and their role to develop their juvenile's safe and secure future, with a logical conclusion.
It is refutable fact that, parent’s primary task is to monitor their children's activities before something wrong happens. This can be done by giving them the tremendous amount of time and stringent guidelines related to society and life rules. This can be easily done by parents than teachers and society. Other external factors have limited role in changing individual behaviors because they are not directly related to the individual. Besides the task, there is another reason why parents should take the responsibility to their child.
Furthermore, parents are role model for their children and in developing age they follow what their parents teach and show them. Moreover, the culture and thinking strategy are directly related to parents. They are highly influence on their parent's work and behavior. For instance, survey conduct among five to ten years old children shows that more than 90% of them want to be like their father in future.Thus, as being role model, it is parent responsibility on guiding their children in the right direction.
In conclusion, parents main role is to monitor their offspring behaviors and become role model because they are directly related to them. Therefore, I also support the view.
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THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT
THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38288288288 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74788435637 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3047510248 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3571428571 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310054907895 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111906210818 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913987299608 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193993727107 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730233511528 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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