The causes of stress in college students
College environment is widely known to be an extremely dynamic but severe one. This brings opportunities for students to spread their swings, however challenges still exist as obstacles that they have to overcome. College students who face these hardships day by day will become more mature and successful in the future life. Nevertheless, it is these pressures that might drive them to the verge of stress and crisis having a bad influence on their existence. The cause of the stressed condition will be discoursed clearly in this essay.
There are several explanations that are worth mentioning about this problem. Financial issue is the first element that contributes to form the stress for the college students. It can be said that the time when students step into college or university represents a milestone for their independent life. Their parents hardly afford to pay for all the fees that are required to pay. They are namely tuition, rental money in case they live far away from home as well as living expenses. To a freshman, the pressure of lack of money in the first days of college life can certainly become an unsolvable barrier that makes them disappointed and stressed. As a result, to solve the financial difficulties, a number of college students tend to apply for part-time jobs, which just ends up reducing the time needed to study.
In addition, stress can also have its origin in students’ anxiety about their outlook jobs. They are always concerned about their jobs in the future and whether they will get a high salary or. Many fears are shaped by the negative thoughts that lead students to be skeptical of their career choices. They frequently wonder if they will be able to pay for the debt in college period time or just even barely have enough to make a living by their outcome. Believe it or not, stress can become higher when the students realize that occupation chances are gained by those who have outstanding qualities as well as wide and deep knowledge bases. In other words, the students who desire to succeed always force putting pressure on themselves to be more unique in both studying and social activities. It is the fierce-competitive job market that causes the popularity of stress in college students in general.
Finally, homesickness is also one of the most common reasons for stress in university students. The college gathers thousands of students being from everywhere in one country or even overseas to conduct its teaching and training process. Therefore, that most of them have to leave their hometowns and go to strange lands to pursue the dreams and ambition is completely understandable. Being distant from family and beloved parents poses a tough obstacle for those teenagers to surpass because people occasionally get the troubles in handling loneliness alone. Unless they gain any sharing and sympathy from their relatives, they will risk suffering stress and struggle with it by themselves. More seriously, if the body get less relaxation, the stress may turn into depression which leads to suicide attempts at a high rate.
In conclusion, the college environment indeed plays a crucial role in making people’s dreams come true and contributes significantly to their future profession and living. However, this environment also brings out the majority of stresses in college students’ life. No doubt that these stresses may exert adverse impacts on mental and physical health, which diminishes their study and daily life quality. Hence, these conditions should be solved as soon as possible to assure meaningful and content of university time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hardships'' or 'hardship's'?
Suggestion: hardships'; hardship's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r independent life. Their parents hardly afford to pay for all the fees that are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in general, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3027.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 592.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11317567568 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72373520198 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 313.0 212.727598566 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528716216216 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 943.2 618.680645161 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6233406176 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.379310345 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4137931034 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75862068966 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357245775189 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1004968028 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105292465285 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223284195394 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059243104697 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 86.8835125448 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.4 Out of 6.0
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