In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays many people all over the world still suffer from hunger and starving despite the number of achievements in agricultural science. This issue will be discussed in this essay along with some possible solutions that may be implemented to tackle the problem.
To begin with, there are several explanations that are worth mentioning about that issue. One of the major causes of this problem is that unequal development of agriculture belongs to different countries in the world. It is clearly proved that the more modern cultivation is, the fewer people be hungry and vice versa. In addition, poor nutrition also plays an outstanding role in this trend. Actually, hunger is not caused just by a lack of access to the food, but a lack of access to the right nutrients. Indigent families with low income often rely on two staple foods (corn and wheat for example), which means they are not getting enough significant macro nutrients and vitamins. It is this problem that exerts a negative impact on their bodies called starvation.
This rising issue extremely needs the attention of society to be solved as soon as possible. First and foremost, strategies related to the agriculture’s development are essential to be discussed and passed by the governments and followed by the citizens, especially in the countries where the hunger is in alarming condition. This also can help to call for the assistance from developed countries in order to surpass this critical time and advance together. Another possible solution is looking for the way to extend the area of cultivated land by improving impoverished soil and making use of them effectively. As a result, we can have increasingly good harvests and meet the demands of people in the world who lack of food and nutrition.
To sum up, hunger is one of the hottest issues in the present-day which can only be eliminated by valuable strategies and co-operate between countries hoping for a brighter future where starvation is nowhere to be found.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 566, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
...ith low income often rely on two staple foods corn and wheat for example, which means...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, look, may, so, still, for example, in addition, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04229607251 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81122654348 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595166163142 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6131559969 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.266666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288732016602 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889424355853 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632800778101 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170488125173 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720385162825 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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