Entertainment is the major aspect needed for each and every individual in the society. Keeping this in mind huge number of the movie production companies have arised in the contemporary world. Each and every year thousands of movies gets released in Box Office and people tend to vacillate which movie to watch and hence reach out to the reviewers and advertisements. Similarly according to the given statement made by the Super Screen Movie Production, if there is a decrease viewers even though the movie reviews are actually getting more positive than previous years, there must be paucity of advertisements. Hence it is necessary to invest more in the advertising given that there will not be lesser investments in making the movie.
In each and every section of the society there is something called as "Blind following". Any gadget with the symbol of semi eaten apple symbol has more worth than rest of the gadgets even though the latter provides better service as well as the performance as there is vast amount of advertisements which are done on behalf of the former ones. Similarly, in the case of entertainment field, many of the movies involving those nepotistic offspring as lead actors are introduced through greater advertisements and attract the crowd irrespective of the same old exhausted story line. Hence if the advertisements are more, then there is a lot of attraction towards the movie. Hence it is a considerable factor that some greater share of money has to be spent in this chicanery in order to get more viewers by Super Screen Production company.
Movie reviews play major role in endorsing the movie. Now a days, there are professional movie reviewers other than that of the government and censor reviewers. The reviewers of Trailers and teasers by the movie as a part of advertisements via the social media elements like YouTube make the greater difference and also increase the viewers rate. They also insist not to make the pirated copies of the movies as well. The lead actors of the movies are called upon interviews in their shows to advertise the movies as well. Hence the Super Screen Productions, if their reviews are getting better year after year, have to cope with these private reviewers and shows to get their movie into people's mouth.
In a nutshell, the present world each and every type of the industries has huge number of followers who compete in between them. To reach the apogee they tend to get flamboyant and tend to market in their product in more diverse sense via advertising. Similarly, Super Screen production company is the follower of the movies' world and has huge number of competitors. Hence irrespective of the increasing positive reviews taking the examples of the given substantiations there must be allocation of budget for advertisements to gain more viewers in coming years.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 475 350
No. of Characters: 2334 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.668 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.914 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.747 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 153 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.273 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.336 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.086 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...ut to the reviewers and advertisements. Similarly according to the given statement made b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 613, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...here must be paucity of advertisements. Hence it is necessary to invest more in the a...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e of the same old exhausted story line. Hence if the advertisements are more, then th...
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Line 3, column 683, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... a lot of attraction towards the movie. Hence it is a considerable factor that some g...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...play major role in endorsing the movie. Now a days, there are professional movie reviewers...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... major role in endorsing the movie. Now a days, there are professional movie reviewers...
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Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... shows to advertise the movies as well. Hence the Super Screen Productions, if their ...
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Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rld and has huge number of competitors. Hence irrespective of the increasing positive...
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Line 7, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to gain more viewers in coming years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, if, similarly, so, then, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 55.5748502994 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2389.0 2260.96107784 106% => OK
No of words: 475.0 441.139720559 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02947368421 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84845295038 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 204.123752495 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469473684211 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 705.55239521 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3345445608 57.8364921388 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.45 119.503703932 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.70786347227 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.20758483034 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174401142932 0.218282227539 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571908385129 0.0743258471296 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049405159599 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114465369969 0.128457276422 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00502973898181 0.0628817314937 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.3799401198 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 98.500998004 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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