Firstly, according to the author, says that more complaints are being received from the viewers based on coverage of weather and local news but they didn’t receive any complaint to stop the national news in the television. I feel that it's a bad idea to cover complete local news and weather news in their channels.
In order to attract the viewers and to satisfy the contracts the channel may plan some techniques or strategies in required time like for example during the advertisement time the weather report can be presented on the scrolling news so that time will be saved and also there is chance that company got complaints because the efficiency of their whether news may not be accurate like they say today is hot day but the it starts so appropriate news may be not provided to them. I mainly believe all the news are important for the tv channels to show to the people because if we buttress more local news then there is a chance of losing the national news viewers.
Secondly, rather than completely not national news, overlooked news can be given to the public like implementing speed news strategy. If there is a chance advertisements must be given before and after displaying the news in television channels because of this people may also listen to the news without any interruption and additional we will have the chance to cover the plethora amount of news to the public. Apart from these strategies, news channels must take some more time to display or cover the news or they should telecast the news twice or thrice in a day.
To attract the numbers of viewers the news channel should display more imperative and efficient news then only public will believe the their channels and in order to get major profits and revenue from the advertisement company should collaborate with popular companies advertisements and products and also while display ads in television they should follow selection approach for example if the company advertisement contains very less time and gives more money that advertisement must be selected rather than select the advertisement which has more time and invest less money while dealing with this advertisements and contractors company should have some business solving approach ideas then only they can succeed in the market and will stay in the market for long time.
Finally, news displayed in channels should cover complete news details and also customers should be benefited by watching our news then only tv channel TRP’s will increase so from the above statements or sentence I can say that I will completely disagree with the author's perception in this essay.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 443 350
No. of Characters: 2159 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.588 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.874 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.609 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 44.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.833 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.511 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.695 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.289 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nal news in the television. I feel that its a bad idea to cover complete local news...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...rate like they say today is hot day but the it starts so appropriate news may be not p...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 586, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...how to the people because if we buttress more local news then there is a chance o...
^^
Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...because if we buttress more local news then there is a chance of losing the nationa...
^^^^
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advertisement'?
Suggestion: advertisement
...eed news strategy. If there is a chance advertisements must be given before and after displayi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 132, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...ient news then only public will believe the their channels and in order to get major prof...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 597, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd invest less money while dealing with this advertisements and contractors company ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the market for long time. Finally, news displayed in channels should cover ...
^^
Line 8, column 266, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...hat I will completely disagree with the authors perception in this essay.
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the authors perception in this essay.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, apart from, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.9520958084 185% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 11.1786427146 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 2260.96107784 97% => OK
No of words: 442.0 441.139720559 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97058823529 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63655824219 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43665158371 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 22.8473053892 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 201.403838526 57.8364921388 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.111111111 119.503703932 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.1111111111 23.324526521 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.70786347227 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364856385173 0.218282227539 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209954368244 0.0743258471296 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520278738561 0.0701772020484 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245638824266 0.128457276422 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082176692049 0.0628817314937 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 14.3799401198 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.3550499002 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.197005988 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 12.3882235529 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 11.1389221557 194% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.9071856287 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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