Basically, to run healthy relationships in society the person who does crime should be punished according to protocols and laws and crime is crime even though he does with knowing or without knowing. So I agree with the author statement or abet his statement.
If the criminal is not punished in the right way then there is chance of doing more criminal activities by him day by day, the level of crime should be directly related to level of punishment which means that if criminal does small crime he should be punished for less amount of time and also for small crimes the chance must be given for them to chance and even though they don’t change then should be punished badly. Also, for the criminals no rights should be provided and no funds be provided or distributed by the government and I also think his family should also be punished because if we implement this method or system in the government then criminals will fear or care about their family while doing the criminal activities and they stop doing them.
Also, government related cards and bank related cards or accounts should be blocked so that they will not be able to escape from the punishment and go to other countries. For example consider case study of kingfisher owner vijay Mallya, he took plethora amount of money for loan in india banks and he didn’t pay in time and no action is taken by him by indian government the reason is because he went to another countries for suppose at time of leaving if government bans vijay mallya passport or cards then he will not chance to go to different countries and he may be punished according to the law.
Generally, every human being in the world should have and follow some rights so if we cancel that rights to criminals then criminals will fear about their future and livelihood and stop doing them. So in order to stop the criminals the government or the administration should provide strict rules and regulations then only they will change. Also the criminals should be punished in less time for example in above case study vijay mallya has not been punished upto now and because of this incident many people will not have right opinion on the society, laws and for governments. right to vote, right to work facilities or options should not be provided for the criminal peoples.
Finally, crime is a crime even though it is done with knowing or without knowing and also it may be any circumstance the criminals should be punished and the innocent people should be rewarded. Also, in future the system of laws should be updated like if he does the criminal activity in one place then a charge sheet should be filed in all the countries and states then criminals will not escape from the government.
- The following appeared in a memo from the director of a large group of hospitals In a controlled laboratory study of liquid hand soaps a concentrated solution of extra strength UltraClean hand soap produced a 40 percent greater reduction in harmful bac 60
- In surveys Mason City residents rank water sport swimming boating and fishing among their favorite recreational activities The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits however and the city park department devotes little of it 50
- Argumentative Over the past year our late night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news During the same time period most of the complaints we received from viewers were con 53
- A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 7, column 384, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
... by him by indian government the reason is because he went to another countries for suppos...
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Line 9, column 342, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...regulations then only they will change. Also the criminals should be punished in les...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Right
... the society, laws and for governments. right to vote, right to work facilities or op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2263.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70478170478 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43163623979 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403326403326 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.828334464 60.3974514979 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.583333333 118.986275619 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0833333333 23.4991977007 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14464745185 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797747085979 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520151331998 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103778988949 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463162981143 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 14.1392134831 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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