According to the author he says that Mason river is rarely used for pursuing so I feel that some more money should not be invested by the government on the river because,however , the city park department is funding some money so with money they should clean the river and also acquire the recreational facilities they need. So I dissent with the author's perception of investing some more money.
As the river is not helpful for the industries or for agriculture purposes there is no reason for the government to invest more money and as many complaints are given about the quality of water and smell I am really confused about how the residents can play the water sports in that river. I feel that the city government should follow certain strategies and plan for cleaning water but should not abet the people to play games in that river. Apart from that only limited people love water games not everyone so investing too much money on that is senseless rather than investing in it government can invest that money in developing industries or in reducing unemployment in the city.
If the government spends money only for the river cleaning it will be biased problem in city because when the government is investing the money in the city it should be helpful for many people in the city but not only for some people in order to abet sports, If that is tourist place or any monument or ancient building then government may invest because people for different country come and visit but the mason river is not the tourist place. Also, the author says that the river is mainly used for playing water games by residents in recent years, so how is that river adulterated?and is there any assurance that again if the government invested money to clean it will not be polluted. Also, when people play water games the government should also think about the safety measures of the people like when there is heavy rains or heavy flow of water in the river then there is a chance that people may sink in the water or face some problems.,
Finally, some serious measures must be taken by the government to clean the water but not encourage the water games in the river.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...d by the government on the river because,however , the city park department is funding s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...lities they need. So I dissent with the authors perception of investing some more money...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for the government to invest more money and as many complaints are given about t...
^^
Line 5, column 695, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to clean it will not be polluted. Also, when people play water games the governm...
^^
Line 5, column 809, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are heavy rains'?
Suggestion: there are heavy rains
...safety measures of the people like when there is heavy rains or heavy flow of water in the river the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 946, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ink in the water or face some problems., Finally, some serious measures must be t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, really, so, then, apart from, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 383.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6684073107 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43079115922 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389033942559 0.468620217663 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 705.55239521 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 22.8473053892 206% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.732965758 57.8364921388 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 223.5 119.503703932 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 47.875 23.324526521 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.70786347227 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198557150056 0.218282227539 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101462922366 0.0743258471296 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644851284886 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130194509668 0.128457276422 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391803903713 0.0628817314937 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 14.3799401198 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 48.3550499002 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 12.197005988 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 98.500998004 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.1389221557 187% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.9071856287 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...d by the government on the river because,however , the city park department is funding s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...lities they need. So I dissent with the authors perception of investing some more money...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for the government to invest more money and as many complaints are given about t...
^^
Line 5, column 695, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to clean it will not be polluted. Also, when people play water games the governm...
^^
Line 5, column 809, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are heavy rains'?
Suggestion: there are heavy rains
...safety measures of the people like when there is heavy rains or heavy flow of water in the river the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 946, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ink in the water or face some problems., Finally, some serious measures must be t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, really, so, then, apart from, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 383.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6684073107 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43079115922 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389033942559 0.468620217663 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 705.55239521 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 22.8473053892 206% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.732965758 57.8364921388 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 223.5 119.503703932 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 47.875 23.324526521 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.70786347227 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198557150056 0.218282227539 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101462922366 0.0743258471296 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644851284886 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130194509668 0.128457276422 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391803903713 0.0628817314937 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 14.3799401198 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 48.3550499002 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 12.197005988 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 98.500998004 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.1389221557 187% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.9071856287 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.