The Commercial airline industry in the country of Freedonia has experienced impressive growth in the past three years. This trend will surely continue in the years to come, since the airline industry will benefit from recent changes in Freedonian society: Income are rising, most employees now receive more vacation time, and interest in travel is rising, as shown by an increase in media attention devoted to foreign culture and tourist attractions
Commercial airline industries in Freedonia have experienced substantial benefits for the past three years; furthermore, people’s income and media attention to foreign tourist attractions has increased all together. Based on these facts, the author of the argument concludes that, the industry will surely continue to prosper for the coming years. Though the underlying issue may have merits, but because of lack of complete analysis of the market rules of supply and demand, lack of consideration time change factors, also use of vague and ambiguous terminologies the author argument uncorroborated and deeply flawed.
To begin, the conclusion is based largely on the perception that, what hold true three years ago, still holds true today. Business depends on status of economy, when the economy is doing badly then businesses will struggle. If three years ago the economy was doing very well, but now it is going down. In such, a situation, even if people’s income will increase – for example salaries being doubled- but the economy is poor, people will be more conscious with money. Probably, for vacation will choose to visit local areas. Since the author does not provide any information about the economy status; it is impossible to guarantee the projected success.
Additionally, the author failed to analyze both the sides of supply and demand on airline business. The underlying assumption is that, the supply of airlines will remain constant. This is flawed because; given the surge of potential market for on airline it is more likely more companies will foresee the benefits and increase number of airlines and therefore increase the competition. On the other hand even if people there few airline companies and people get more vacations, the author was expected to proved that the majority are willing to travel outside the country. None of these concerns have been addressed; and this presents askew view of the overall conclusion.
The argument could be strengthened in one way, if the author provided information regarding the supply of airlines. If they have dominated the business and they have no competitors that would be an advantageous to them. Furthermore, more evidence is needed to be establishing about the interest of people to travel. In this case, the argument could further strengthen if the author was more specific on ambiguous phrases like, “interest in travel is rising”. As it stands, however, the argument is flawed for the reasons indicated.
To sum up, because the argument makes several unwarranted assumption, it fails to make a convincing case that, the airline industry should expect substantial increase in the coming years.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246435845214 0.25644967241 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.16700610998 0.15541462614 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0733197556008 0.0836205057962 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0529531568228 0.0520304965353 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0162932790224 0.0272364105082 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116089613035 0.125424944231 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0488798370672 0.0416121511921 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83436682553 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0264765784114 0.026700313972 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0040733197556 0.001811407834 225% => OK
Determiners: 0.105906313646 0.113004496875 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0244399185336 0.0255425247493 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0081466395112 0.0127820249294 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2703.0 2731.13054187 99% => OK
No of words: 426.0 446.07635468 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.34507042254 6.12365571057 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.420187793427 0.378187486979 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307511737089 0.287650121315 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.230046948357 0.208842608468 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140845070423 0.135150697306 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83436682553 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 207.018472906 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539906103286 0.469332199767 115% => OK
Word variations: 62.4504298157 52.1807786196 120% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.039408867 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3 23.2022227129 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4549141195 57.7814097925 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.15 141.986410481 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 23.2022227129 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.724660767414 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.58251231527 84% => OK
Readability: 52.0511737089 51.9672348444 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.74137931034 1.8405768891 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.502311069442 0.441005458295 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111155481057 0.135418324435 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0556001822333 0.0829849096947 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568882016039 0.58762219726 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14909766122 0.147661913831 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20709048993 0.193483328276 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878635888022 0.0970749176394 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395705414153 0.42659136922 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0846321795283 0.0774707102158 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352586823693 0.312017818177 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401910028011 0.0698173142475 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.33743842365 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.82512315271 62% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 6.46551724138 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 14.657635468 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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