The following appeared in an article written by Dr. Karp, an anthropologist.
“Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia and concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than by their own biological parents. However, my recent interviews with children living in the group of islands that includes Tertia show that these children spend much more time talking about their biological parents than about other adults in the village. This research of mine proves that Dr. Field's conclusion about Tertian village culture is invalid and thus that the observation-centered approach to studying cultures is invalid as well. The interview-centered method that my team of graduate students is currently using in Tertia will establish a much more accurate understanding of child-rearing traditions there and in other island cultures.”
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The argument concludes that interview centered method for understanding the child-rearing situation in Tertia and other island cultures is much accurate than observation centered approach.This conclusion is based on the premise that the Dr. Karp’s study rendered different result than the earlier anthropologist who used observation centered approch. However the argument takes many assumptions that the author does not provide justification to.
Firstly, the author fails to consider that even if the interview-centered approach renders the correct result in Tertian and nearby islands, the same might not work in other island cultures. As there is no such evidence that natives of other island culture may render humility to support any kind of study. Moreover, it is difficult to say that whether they would be able to communicate at all in any language understandable to the graduate students carrying out the study.
Secondly, as there is considerable time gap between Dr. Field’s study and the author’s recent interviews it might be possible that the social culture within the island has changed, and in such a case both of the scientist are correct in their conclusion of the study. Hence there is no reason to believe that one method might be superior than another. So in such a situation, it would be necessary to note that whether there have been any change in the child rearing in last twenty years.
Finally, there is no such evidence to prove that the children chosen for the study are representative of the complete population. This might be a rare co-incidence that the sample selected, turns out to disapprove Dr. Field’s conclusion.
Hence, the argument conclusion that interview centered method for understanding the child-rearing situation in Tertia and other island cultures is much accurate than observation centered approach, is flawed. If the author demonstrated that his results was not merely due to selective sampling, and can be reciprocated in other islands as well, the argument would be greatly strengthened. However, in its current form it would be to wrong to accept the conclusion.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1747 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.169 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.922 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 132 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.749 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.846 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.631 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...rate than observation centered approach.This conclusion is based on the premise that...
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Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... who used observation centered approch. However the argument takes many assumptions tha...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ight not work in other island cultures. As there is no such evidence that natives ...
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Line 9, column 279, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...rrect in their conclusion of the study. Hence there is no reason to believe that one ...
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Line 9, column 349, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...lieve that one method might be superior than another. So in such a situation, it wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 337.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40356083086 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09577332569 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516320474777 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7000757731 57.8364921388 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.076923077 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.70786347227 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138830770863 0.218282227539 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455416602478 0.0743258471296 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495652169482 0.0701772020484 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831728911039 0.128457276422 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423052689209 0.0628817314937 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.3799401198 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.3550499002 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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