The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend.
"Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Real estate firm’s business is one of the speedy growing businesses in world. People invest in real estate and earn great profit from it but this is depends on the economic conditions of the country. In the given letter written by homeowner to a friend explains the comparison between Adams Realty and Fitch Realty. According to house owners experience the Adams Realty is superior and sold the house faster than the Fitch Realty. The last years revenue is twice of Adams and also the home sell that averaged $ 168,000 compared to Fitch's $ 144,000. These are the reasons that shows one should use Adams Realty; but there are some points which shows the argument with the conclusion made by house owner.
The house owner explained that ten years ago he listed his home with Fitch and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when he sold the home, he listed it with Adams and it took only one month to sell. The comparison should be made between similar quantities whereas here he sold one of the homes ten years ago and another was last year. In a decade of ten years the economy changes very rapidly and the Real Estate business also boomed it may be possibility that due to time change the Adams sold the home in a month only.
Additionally, to sold a home so many factors are responsible not only the Realty Estate. For example if I want to buy a home then I get the information about locality of home, architecture, age of home, material used and durability of home, cost of home mainly after that I took my decision to buy the home. The comparison was made only on the basis of time taken to sell the home and ignores other factors, which is not appropriate.
Finally, Adams is clearly superior to Fitch in terms of business expansion and revenue but we cannot assume such results on the basis of aggrandized business size only. For example, large scale companies produce cotton cloth and small scale companies also produce cotton cloth in India and there is very little difference between products whereas difference found between the sizes of company, so we can say large scale company is clearly superior to small scale company.
Conclusively, realty Estate business depends on the economic conditions of country and in the give letter the facts are not sufficient which say that the Adams Realty is clearly superior to Fitch Realty.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- duplicated to argument 1
argument 3 -- better not to use external examples.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 412 350
No. of Characters: 1903 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.505 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.619 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.3 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.34 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.361 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.17 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 446, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
... faster than the Fitch Realty. The last years revenue is twice of Adams and also the ...
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Line 1, column 515, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$168'.
Suggestion: $168
...ms and also the home sell that averaged $ 168,000 compared to Fitchs $ 144,000. These...
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Line 1, column 544, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$144'.
Suggestion: $144
...t averaged $ 168,000 compared to Fitchs $ 144,000. These are the reasons that shows o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, then, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 412.0 441.139720559 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74757281553 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.387524461 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461165048544 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2016316784 57.8364921388 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.4 119.503703932 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4666666667 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 5.70786347227 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254675498059 0.218282227539 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108121467357 0.0743258471296 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974621240193 0.0701772020484 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167053348614 0.128457276422 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134173658667 0.0628817314937 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.3550499002 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.197005988 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 98.500998004 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.