The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.
“Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station’s coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.”
According to the memorandum the television station is dealing with only late night program. And there is no proper information on the number of complaints which are received asking about station's coverage of weather and local news , as the station did not stop giving news on weather and local news , instead they just reduced the time.
The tv station might have just received very less number of complaints which it is taking in to consideration to restore back the same schedule. there is actually no note on the number of viewers for the tv station in the peak hours of time as most of the viewers might be sleeping .
there might be an increase in the cost of advertisement for which is the reason local businesses with draw their advertising in the tv station. so they does not come back just because the tv station restored the local news and weather time back to same time.there may be decreases in the number of local businesses too or the local businesses were getting ample amount of customers and they are having good profits. In each of these cases there would not be increase in advertising contracts to the TC station.
viewers to the tv station even could not be too high as the program delivery timing is at the late night period.Instead if there is coverage of local news and weather at the normal time ,there is chance of increase in viewers. Compitator channels might have aroused which decreased the viewers to this tv station. these new channels if offering low cost for advertising local businesses , then possibility to restore back the viewers and advertising contracts won't happen.
In the previous year elections in the local area also result in more viewers engaging in this tv station .cricket tournaments also results in viewer willing to watch for weather report so that they can go for watching them in stadiums the next day . even these does not result in restoring back viewers this year .as there are no elections or cricket tournaments.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 342 350
No. of Characters: 1609 1500
No. of Different Words: 147 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.3 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.705 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.499 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 42.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.214 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.479 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.784 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.181 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tions coverage of weather and local news , as the station did not stop giving news...
^^
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...op giving news on weather and local news , instead they just reduced the time. ...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ead they just reduced the time. The tv station might have just received ...
^^
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...tion to restore back the same schedule. there is actually no note on the number of vi...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...as most of the viewers might be sleeping . there might be an increase in ...
^^
Line 13, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...he viewers might be sleeping . there might be an increase in the cost of adv...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...aw their advertising in the tv station. so they does not come back just because th...
^^
Line 13, column 154, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
... advertising in the tv station. so they does not come back just because the tv stati...
^^^^
Line 19, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Viewers
...g contracts to the TC station. viewers to the tv station even could not be too...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Instead
...very timing is at the late night period.Instead if there is coverage of local news and ...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 114, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...very timing is at the late night period.Instead if there is coverage of local news and ...
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ocal news and weather at the normal time ,there is chance of increase in viewers. ...
^^
Line 19, column 316, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...creased the viewers to this tv station. these new channels if offering low cost for a...
^^^^^
Line 19, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ow cost for advertising local businesses , then possibility to restore back the vi...
^^
Line 25, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...more viewers engaging in this tv station .cricket tournaments also results in view...
^^
Line 25, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r watching them in stadiums the next day . even these does not result in restoring...
^^
Line 25, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...atching them in stadiums the next day . even these does not result in restoring back...
^^^^
Line 25, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sult in restoring back viewers this year .as there are no elections or cricket tou...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 340.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60068657828 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 204.123752495 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 705.55239521 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1449638622 57.8364921388 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 119.503703932 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 23.324526521 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.70786347227 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.25449101796 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303782604906 0.218282227539 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121818898864 0.0743258471296 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986495575386 0.0701772020484 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192165085297 0.128457276422 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105140313088 0.0628817314937 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.3799401198 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.3550499002 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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