An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
The argument topic is to the vitamin A and this topic of the argument the other is not conclude properly for a vitamin A.So we have discuss this questions.
A international development organization in response to a vitamin A and some people deficiency impoverished nation Tagus.So organization is decide to engineered a new breed of millet in high vitamin A.
The new type of the millet is to cost more,organization will be paid subsidies to the farmer to the farming to the new millet.So farmer get to the subsidies and to farming to new millet and is work to hard to the new millet.The one benefit of the farmer is the the organization will give to the subsidies.
The new millet is already a staple food in Tagus and people will readily adopt to the new variety to combat vitamin A.So people is adopt to this new variety so government is Tagus and it will be try best to the promote to this new type of millet.So government is promoted to the millet with a new add,newspaper and etc..
Because of this topic we conclusion that the new millet is very costly and people we be adopt to this new millet to vitamin A.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s not conclude properly for a vitamin A.So we have discuss this questions. A in...
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...ude properly for a vitamin A.So we have discuss this questions. A international deve...
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...farmer to the farming to the new millet.So farmer get to the subsidies and to far...
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...rmer to the farming to the new millet.So farmer get to the subsidies and to farmi...
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...r get to the subsidies and to farming to new millet and is work to hard to the ne...
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...t and is work to hard to the new millet.The one benefit of the farmer is the the or...
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...millet.The one benefit of the farmer is the the organization will give to the subsidies...
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...millet.The one benefit of the farmer is the the organization will give to the subsidies...
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...e food in Tagus and people will readily adopt to the new variety to combat vitamin A.So ...
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... to the new variety to combat vitamin A.So people is adopt to this new variety so ...
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...ariety to combat vitamin A.So people is adopt to this new variety so government is Tagus...
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...Because of this topic we conclusion that the new millet is very costly and people...
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... millet is very costly and people we be adopt to this new millet to vitamin A.
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Discourse Markers used:
['so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283018867925 0.25644967241 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.146226415094 0.15541462614 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108490566038 0.0836205057962 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0330188679245 0.0520304965353 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0188679245283 0.0272364105082 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.061320754717 0.125424944231 49% => More prepositions wanted.
Participles: 0.0283018867925 0.0416121511921 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84097280695 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0990566037736 0.026700313972 371% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.160377358491 0.113004496875 142% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0188679245283 0.0255425247493 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0127820249294 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1128.0 2731.13054187 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 446.07635468 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52941176471 6.12365571057 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.57801047555 83% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303921568627 0.378187486979 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210784313725 0.287650121315 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132352941176 0.208842608468 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0980392156863 0.135150697306 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84097280695 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 207.018472906 38% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.387254901961 0.469332199767 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 32.3989656382 52.1807786196 62% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 20.039408867 20% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.2022227129 220% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 113.619980637 57.7814097925 197% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.0 141.986410481 199% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 23.2022227129 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.724660767414 34% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 3.58251231527 698% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 72.0784313725 51.9672348444 139% => OK
Elegance: 1.88095238095 1.8405768891 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465456796954 0.441005458295 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.315494673825 0.135418324435 233% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.179081185537 0.0829849096947 216% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.58762219726 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.71995011398e-16 0.147661913831 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.360855313118 0.193483328276 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155161274887 0.0970749176394 160% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.38325755074 0.42659136922 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.190530720874 0.0774707102158 246% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344191405597 0.312017818177 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139697739819 0.0698173142475 200% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.33743842365 36% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 14.657635468 27% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.