In a laboratory study of two different industrial cleansers, CleanAll was found to remove 40% more dirt and kill 30% more bacteria than the next best cleanser. Furthermore, a study showed that employees working at buildings cleaned with cleanAll used far fewer sick leaves than employees working in the buildings cleaned with the other cleaners. Therefore, to prevent employee illness, all companies should use CleanAll as their industrial cleaners.
Write the response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
In the argument the author suggests that all companies should adopt CleanAll as a cleansing agent based on certain facts the the author sites. The argument however depends on additional assumptions, which if found to be not true can weaken the conclusion.
The main assumption here is that the fewer sick leaves by the employees of the companies which used the CleanAll cleanser was related to only to the clean surroundings of the building in which they worked. The argument assumes that the other companies whose employees took more sick leaves had fallen ill primarily due to the dirtier and unhygenic surroundings of the building in which they worked.
Based on this assumption the argument urges all companies to use CleanAll as their industrial cleanser. However this assumption may not necessarily be true. The fewer sick leaves in the employees of the companies using CleanAll could be due to their healthy lifestyle. It could be possible that the employees in these companies take better care of their health which gets reflected in the fewer sick leaves taken by them. CleanAll may thus have no direct relation to employees taking sick leaves.
If the assumption proves out to be unwarranted, then inspite of using CleanAll the sick leaves taken by the employees of the company may not get reduced at all. In fact they may rise if the employees start following an unhealthy routine after the use of CleanAll. So there would be no reason of using CleanAll to mainly prevent employee illness.
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... cleansing agent based on certain facts the the author sites. The argument however depe...
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...s of the building in which they worked. The argument assumes that the other compani...
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...s all companies to use CleanAll as their industrial cleanser. However this assump...
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...CleanAll as their industrial cleanser. However this assumption may not necessarily be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, thus, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 11.1786427146 9% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 55.5748502994 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 2260.96107784 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 252.0 441.139720559 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9880952381 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60891498324 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 204.123752495 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496031746032 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 705.55239521 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0175120246 57.8364921388 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.324526521 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.70786347227 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166301796901 0.218282227539 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739926354048 0.0743258471296 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465945975113 0.0701772020484 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107283581353 0.128457276422 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372026251259 0.0628817314937 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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