"Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
The letter of the editor of a national aeronautics megazine provide information that unmanned space probes and satellite has recent sucesses and less costly and without dengerous with comparing to manned space flight. But this agument is flawed because satelite and space probes can not take tecnical and logistic decision, these unmanned space flight is may be eqally costly and dangerous, this are unreliable campare to manned space flight.
Space probes and satellite are not take tecnical and logistic decision. For example, in space there happen some unexpected incidents and probes are not programmed to get rid over this type of incedets. Instead of this robotic instruments, men will be take to handled that type of problems. Artificial intellegent are not uniqely good resources for all investment.
Another flawed is space probes and satellite may be more costly compare to manned space flight. Like if we conduct of our all activities with space probes and satellites then cost much higher for conduct this instrument form base camp. This instrument has some cost for build them and additional cost for to operate them. But in manned space flight, these additional cost not needed beacause men are handle this task with ownself.
If the editor of this megazine provide some authentic examples and incidents then he/she convinces to space company authority to invest their ressources in unmanned space flight. In current form, this argument has many explicit flaw.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The letter of the editor of a national aeronautics megazine provide information that unmanned space probes and satellite has recent sucesses and less costly and without dengerous with comparing to manned space flight.
Error: sucesses Suggestion: successes
Error: megazine Suggestion: magazine
Error: dengerous Suggestion: dangerous
Sentence: But this agument is flawed because satelite and space probes can not take tecnical and logistic decision, these unmanned space flight is may be eqally costly and dangerous, this are unreliable campare to manned space flight.
Error: satelite Suggestion: satellite
Error: eqally Suggestion: equally
Error: tecnical Suggestion: technical
Error: agument Suggestion: augment
Error: campare Suggestion: compare
Sentence: Space probes and satellite are not take tecnical and logistic decision.
Error: tecnical Suggestion: technical
Sentence: For example, in space there happen some unexpected incidents and probes are not programmed to get rid over this type of incedets.
Error: incedets Suggestion: incidents
Sentence: Artificial intellegent are not uniqely good resources for all investment.
Error: intellegent Suggestion: intelligent
Error: uniqely Suggestion: uniquely
Sentence: Another flawed is space probes and satellite may be more costly compare to manned space flight.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: But in manned space flight, these additional cost not needed beacause men are handle this task with ownself.
Error: ownself Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: beacause Suggestion: because
Sentence: If the editor of this megazine provide some authentic examples and incidents then he/she convinces to space company authority to invest their ressources in unmanned space flight.
Error: megazine Suggestion: magazine
Error: ressources Suggestion: resources
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argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- not OK
argument 3 -- not OK
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samples:
https://www.testbig.com/gmatgre-essays/following-opinion-was-provided-l…
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 1.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 13 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 237 350
No. of Characters: 1217 1500
No. of Different Words: 125 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.924 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.135 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.454 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.565 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.397 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.616 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.186 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nts and probes are not programmed to get rid over this type of incedets. Instead ...
^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... much higher for conduct this instrument form base camp. This instrument has som...
^^
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...trument form base camp. This instrument has some cost for build them and additio...
^^
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spacing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spacing
...les and incidents then he/she convinces to space company authority to invest their resso...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 13.6137724551 15% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 55.5748502994 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 2260.96107784 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 441.139720559 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28813559322 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.56307096286 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51159334295 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 204.123752495 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521186440678 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 705.55239521 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7912072224 57.8364921388 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 23.324526521 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.70786347227 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380731531811 0.218282227539 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158613467876 0.0743258471296 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122361093344 0.0701772020484 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243748968271 0.128457276422 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137894766326 0.0628817314937 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.3550499002 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 98.500998004 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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