Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents are always a crucial part for every human being. I agree with idea that now-a-days parents are take part in theris kid's academic then in the past. I feel this way for two main reason which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, today parents are understand their children far better than the past time. In modern time, If children are doing some great result in their education then parents will really understant what behind the reason for great result. My personal experience is a very conpelling example for this. When I was class six at high school then I would used to go to the school with my father. He drove me to the school everyday and talked with me various things about education related. Sometimes, he consulted with my class teacher about my academic performance and homework. If I was missing some assignment then he would reminded to me about the work and helped me to dooing my homework. Though he had not enough time to spend with me, he always suggested to me how to acquired good grade in the exam. He really understant me very well and therefore I secured a good grade at the end of my semester.
Finally, now-a-days parents are more friendly to their children and that helps to gain a good result in the children academic perfromance. When parents are understand their kids well then they will become very intimate with their children and that assits the children to perform a great academic achievement. For instance, my mother is a great women in my life. She understand me and also she is my best friend. When I admitted at the university, my mother would help to me to choose the right subject for me and she suggested to me to choose the geology subject. As she undertand me very well and know about me that's why she actually know which subject is better for me. So I admitted at the geology subject.
Therefore, I completed to my undergraduate degree wih a good CGPA and right after the result I also got a very good job. If my mother is not my best friend then it will be never happened.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that parents are involved in their offspring's education. This is because parents are close friends and understant their kinds far better than any one that helps to secure a good performance in the education
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: remind
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Suggestion: understands
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, firstly, if, really, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62254901961 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52241846556 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44362745098 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.551926931 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7391304348 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178158798932 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640345266689 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751983365692 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113828769754 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653183389601 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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