One month ago, all the showerheads on the first five floors of Sunnyside Towers were modified to restrict the water flow to approximately one-third of its original flow. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are not yet a

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One month ago, all the showerheads on the first five floors of Sunnyside Towers were modified to restrict the water flow to approximately one-third of its original flow. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are not yet available, the change will obviously result in a considerable savings for Sunnyside Corporation, since the corporation must pay for water each month. Except for a few complaints about low water pressure, no problems with showers have been reported since the adjustment. Clearly, restricting water flow throughout all the twenty floors of Sunnyside Towers will increase our profits further."

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

The argument seems to well put together with the conclusion at inital glance,but lacks heavily in deep analysis of the evidence to make the claim.The author asserted that all floors sunnyside towers need to be modified with showerheads to increase profits for sunnyside Corporation.The information provided seems too superficial and doesnt fully serve the purpose in corroboration with the argument.

Firstly,initially the showerheads are modified only for the first five floors of the building and conclusion is made such that all floors need to be modified based on those first five floors.This could be very absurd as the first five floors could not represent the whole building.Also people who are residents in these five floors may have less consumption and that could not be case with all other floors of the apartment.Furthermore,there is no data regarding number of residents of the whole building and also persons per floor.If the first five floors have less no of residents and most of the rooms could be vacant which leads to false conclusion.
On the other hand,reducing flow of the water intentionally may actually backfire as other sources of water supply need to be utilised which again costs more for sunnyside Corporation.Additionally water pipeline system of the building needs to be thoroughly checked for any major leaks present which could waste lot of water even though residents utilise the water economially. Another major flaw in the argument is that is mentioned about non availability of data of actual usage and usage after restriction.Without knowing the crucial evidence of how the water is being consumed and understanding regular patterns of water consumption,the argument is completely blind in making the claim.

Another flaw in the argument is that modification is before one month where the situation could be different as water could be availabe in plenty.However,it may not be the situation now as times change as well as the weather conditions.Even after the modifications done and if it is mid summer,the results of saving water is fruitless.

To conclude,the author failed badly in putting up a sound argument with profound analysis and clear evidence which raised the above doubts resulted in reaching a weak conclusion.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 360.0 441.139720559 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31388888889 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41474539477 2.78398813304 123% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508333333333 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 22.8473053892 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.761650624 57.8364921388 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 318.833333333 119.503703932 267% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 23.324526521 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6666666667 5.70786347227 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.25449101796 476% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240972870017 0.218282227539 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106701894538 0.0743258471296 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534315776112 0.0701772020484 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109940162192 0.128457276422 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646722705423 0.0628817314937 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 14.3799401198 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 48.3550499002 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 12.197005988 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.32208582834 122% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 98.500998004 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 12.3882235529 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 11.1389221557 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 1875 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.96 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.638 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 54 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.928 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.471 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.763 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.175 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5